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(09-16-2024, 04:13 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  
(09-15-2024, 01:21 AM)Valerie Please Wrote:  Touch the earth,
face in the dirt:
A silent ball
breaking, wailing,
but also
waiting.
I like the idea.
Not sure about the idea of a 'ball' and silent seems at odds with wailing.
'but also' is unnecessary.
Ball seems subjective to me. Maybe a silent future (the future of the plant). Just an idea
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Messages In This Thread
Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-15-2024, 01:21 AM
RE: Seed - by DeluxDelightful - 09-15-2024, 04:00 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-16-2024, 02:36 AM
RE: Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-18-2024, 12:58 AM
RE: Seed - by Magpie - 09-16-2024, 04:13 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-16-2024, 04:41 AM
RE: Seed - by Magpie - 09-16-2024, 04:50 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-18-2024, 01:50 AM
RE: Seed - by WiredWild327 - 09-18-2024, 02:04 AM
RE: Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-18-2024, 04:20 AM



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