Sex Death and Sour Cream

Sex Death and Sour Cream

Knot

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09-10-2024, 11:06 PM

Hi Bunx,
hmmm. I wonder if you need the political? The poem seems strongest when addressing the personal. I think the keyword is 'humble'.

Best, Knot

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Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 09-08-2024, 01:12 AM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Knot - 09-09-2024, 11:13 PM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 09-09-2024, 11:21 PM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Knot - 09-10-2024, 01:08 AM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 09-10-2024, 01:17 AM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 09-10-2024, 08:42 AM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Knot - 09-10-2024, 11:06 PM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 09-10-2024, 11:09 PM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by carahmellow - 10-08-2024, 01:47 PM

RE: Sex Death and Sour Cream - by Bunx - 10-09-2024, 12:11 AM

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