09-06-2024, 03:05 PM
I think just wheels works well enough to convey the wheelchair without explicitly saying it. I also wish a bit I could feel the physical experience of being so connected to the way wheels roll on pavement as well as the social aspect that comes with it a little bit more. I genuinely love poetry that opens new perspectives and thrusts you into a first person view of something foreign like this one does to me. So maybe thats why I desire more details. But I do love the "cuclunk cuclunk." It gives such a solid ending and my mind really hears it, the ending sinks in.