08-31-2024, 01:58 PM
The second half of the poem is beautiful and worthy of being a poem in itself.
It's the repetition of 'in the morning' that seems off.
'swallows in the morning' is essentially the same as 'birds in the morning' from the first half.
Just a thought,
Cheers
It's the repetition of 'in the morning' that seems off.
'swallows in the morning' is essentially the same as 'birds in the morning' from the first half.
Just a thought,
Cheers
wae aye man ye radgie