08-18-2024, 11:09 AM
This reminds of like living the pirate life Luffy in One Piece.
I'm not much for structure feedback. Though I would this poem expanded.
I'm thinking about my life recently like today I played basketball with this cute family. This Aunt taking care of her sisters kids.
Just adding one example of a middle aged man letting loose.
"Riding my bike down a hill
Thinking about falling because I can"
Kind of thing..
This poem inspires lean in on that for future works .
When were in late stage capitalism were all pirates anyways
I'm not much for structure feedback. Though I would this poem expanded.
I'm thinking about my life recently like today I played basketball with this cute family. This Aunt taking care of her sisters kids.
Just adding one example of a middle aged man letting loose.
"Riding my bike down a hill
Thinking about falling because I can"
Kind of thing..
This poem inspires lean in on that for future works .
When were in late stage capitalism were all pirates anyways
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx