(08-17-2024, 08:00 PM)SpruceMoose Wrote: We often laugh as children do
Not living by middle aged rules
Is the 'we' you? Or society? And is it the children specifically not living by middle aged rules that you laugh as? Or is it you, we, living by middle aged rules, not often laughing, I understand I think what you're saying but unless I say it in a sing song get-to-the-end way I get caught up in slightly confusing details.
In cages of demure maturity
Scarred and time sharpened tools
I'm getting 'list' vibes, are the cages scarred? The 'we' in the cages scarred? Are we the tools? It's sort of a bunch of symbols mixed together
Jammed in lurching economy
Dented broken burned
More list, 'a' lurching economy? Lurching economies?
Who long again for puerility
When freed by lessons unlearned
If you long again for puerility, do you often laugh as children do? Do you long for puerility when you're free? Or do you have it?
I believe Ralph wiggum is unfortunately a caricature of learning disabilities and would suggest an ode to puerility since i had to look that word up. Thanks for including it. And thanks for posting
(Thats not the real title. I don't have one. But what I do have is poor understanding of sentence structure... after all
these
years.
But I start an english course Monday. Pointers are much appreciated.)
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

