Ode to Ralph Wiggim
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So what I am after is more of an Us and Them. S1 being us. S2-4 describing them. S4 being how they can be free of the cage.

I am unsure of how to word that to briefly define that shift. Or maybe i could make it just about the "us" and end it with "we're/we were."

Puerility was the word replacing childishness. Not meant to be an insult. Will consult thesaurus further on that count.
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Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-17-2024, 08:00 PM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Knot - 08-18-2024, 12:40 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-18-2024, 12:55 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Knot - 08-18-2024, 01:20 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by CRNDLSM - 08-18-2024, 07:14 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Bunx - 08-18-2024, 11:09 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-18-2024, 09:32 PM



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