Ode to Ralph Wiggim
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We could laugh just as children do
Not living by middle aged rules

Yet caught in cages of maturity
As scarred and time sharpened tools

Jammed in lurching economy
Dented broken burned

We long again for friviloty
And are freed by lessons unlearned

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We often laugh as children do
Not living by middle aged rules

In cages of demure maturity
Scarred and time sharpened tools

Jammed in lurching economy
Dented broken burned

Who long again for puerility
When freed by lessons unlearned



(Thats not the real title. I don't have one. But what I do have is poor understanding of sentence structure... after all
these
years.
But I start an english course Monday.  Pointers are much appreciated.)
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Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-17-2024, 08:00 PM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Knot - 08-18-2024, 12:40 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-18-2024, 12:55 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Knot - 08-18-2024, 01:20 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by CRNDLSM - 08-18-2024, 07:14 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by Bunx - 08-18-2024, 11:09 AM
RE: Ode to Ralph Wiggim - by SpruceMoose - 08-18-2024, 09:32 PM



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