08-17-2024, 05:05 AM
(08-16-2024, 09:38 PM)SpruceMoose Wrote:Oops, spelling error! I thought I fixed that. Thank you.(08-16-2024, 08:08 PM)JamesG Wrote:Cambridge dictionary has it without the e.(08-16-2024, 02:13 PM)flotsson Wrote: can you see themIs "mirey" a word? Not that there is necessarily anything wrong with making up words, but I am not sure it works here anyway.
writhe
over their kin
a Rat King's born
alone in the mirey
dark
Trying something different from my normal stuff, playing around with brevity.
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/dict...glish/miry
(08-16-2024, 02:13 PM)flotsson Wrote: can you see them
writhe
over their kin
a Rat King's born
alone in the miry
dark
Trying something different from my normal stuff, playing around with brevity.
Please be harsh. I don't take well to praise. If I'm harsh with your poem, that means I liked it.