08-16-2024, 07:27 PM
(08-16-2024, 02:13 PM)flotsson Wrote: can you see themGood use of imagery. I was confused on how we go from "them" and "writhe over their kin" to "alone." Until I looked up what a Rat King was.
writhe
over their kin
a Rat King's born
alone in the mirey
dark
Trying something different from my normal stuff, playing around with brevity.

