Conflagration
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can you see them 
writhe 
over their kin 
a Rat King's born 
alone in the miry 
dark

Trying something different from my normal stuff, playing around with brevity.
Please be harsh. I don't take well to praise. If I'm harsh with your poem, that means I liked it.
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Messages In This Thread
Conflagration - by flotsson - 08-16-2024, 02:13 PM
RE: Conflagration - by SpruceMoose - 08-16-2024, 07:27 PM
RE: Conflagration - by JamesG - 08-16-2024, 08:08 PM
RE: Conflagration - by SpruceMoose - 08-16-2024, 09:38 PM
RE: Conflagration - by JamesG - 08-16-2024, 10:15 PM
RE: Conflagration - by flotsson - 08-17-2024, 05:05 AM
RE: Conflagration - by Collapsed We Swear - 08-17-2024, 05:35 AM
RE: Conflagration - by flotsson - 08-17-2024, 10:50 AM
RE: Conflagration - by Collapsed We Swear - 08-18-2024, 07:13 AM
RE: Conflagration - by flotsson - 08-18-2024, 02:02 PM
RE: Conflagration - by busker - 08-18-2024, 04:23 PM



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