The Animal

[JamesG]

Thanks for the Crit Erthona, that's what I am here for ;0) I think I will lose "The Animal" parts as it seems a bit laboured, looking at it again. The urClouds thing is a bit of an odd one as it was a mistake that I quite liked and kept in, as it seemed to work (at least for me). 

I well remember reading those Stephen Donaldson books in my youth!