07-22-2024, 09:57 PM
Hi Dale.
The white of the chalk and the red of the dirt, red and white, saints and sinners. Looking back I see that is not very clear.
No, I got that, what I meant was I couldn't see much evidence of sinning or saintliness in what followed. Listening to sports in church was as close as I got to one.
Maybe it should be "Roman columns." I used what I used to try to imply fake verses real. I'll work on that.
Well, Romanesque is a particular architectural style: is it the one you're thinking of?
Actually, I got distracted trying to figure out who it was that was hurrying so found it difficult to see what was supposed to have columns. It might be better to re-order the sentence ...
Hurrying on down to the prayer meeting
at the Corinthian columned House of God
the one that sits catty cornered 'cross
from that other, plainer church ...
(You've 'on the corner' and then 'catty cornered'.)
columns generally identify it as a Southern Baptist church. That and the prayer meeting reference.
Thanks for the explanation (that had gone straight over my head.)
I'm thinking of adding "nearly always empty."
Not sure you need to given the opening.
Incidentally, in the penultimate line of S2 you have 'suites' instead of, I think 'suits'. Oh, and 'Super Bowel Sunday' - probably a typo, but funny if it isn't, cos what a test of faith that would be!
Seeing as this is Texas (identified by way of the last picture show reference)
It was the rattlesnakes and mesquite that pointed me TX-wards.
Best, Knot
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The white of the chalk and the red of the dirt, red and white, saints and sinners. Looking back I see that is not very clear.
No, I got that, what I meant was I couldn't see much evidence of sinning or saintliness in what followed. Listening to sports in church was as close as I got to one.
Maybe it should be "Roman columns." I used what I used to try to imply fake verses real. I'll work on that.
Well, Romanesque is a particular architectural style: is it the one you're thinking of?
Actually, I got distracted trying to figure out who it was that was hurrying so found it difficult to see what was supposed to have columns. It might be better to re-order the sentence ...
Hurrying on down to the prayer meeting
at the Corinthian columned House of God
the one that sits catty cornered 'cross
from that other, plainer church ...
(You've 'on the corner' and then 'catty cornered'.)
columns generally identify it as a Southern Baptist church. That and the prayer meeting reference.
Thanks for the explanation (that had gone straight over my head.)
I'm thinking of adding "nearly always empty."
Not sure you need to given the opening.
Incidentally, in the penultimate line of S2 you have 'suites' instead of, I think 'suits'. Oh, and 'Super Bowel Sunday' - probably a typo, but funny if it isn't, cos what a test of faith that would be!
Seeing as this is Texas (identified by way of the last picture show reference)
It was the rattlesnakes and mesquite that pointed me TX-wards.
Best, Knot
.