07-01-2024, 07:35 AM
The hyerbolic 'thousands' jars.
Also, dropping the definite article personifies the wind, and I can't help but think that the 'W' should be capitalised.
But otherwise, nice one. Particularly the last line.
Also, dropping the definite article personifies the wind, and I can't help but think that the 'W' should be capitalised.
But otherwise, nice one. Particularly the last line.