06-24-2024, 12:06 AM
Hey Crndlsm, thanks for your thoughts.
The margarita, the mint, the cream - I tried to use them as extensions of rain cooling things (they are meant to be images of the rain, not really occuring themselves). Not sure if they work too great or not, but I like them. I don't think there's a contradiction with a sunburn and the fact it could rain - often on a hot humid day, it's sunny and then storm clouds form later on.
I think flame can definitely be improved because it is so dry, might change it to sweat - but I think something hot is good - maybe steam?
The margarita, the mint, the cream - I tried to use them as extensions of rain cooling things (they are meant to be images of the rain, not really occuring themselves). Not sure if they work too great or not, but I like them. I don't think there's a contradiction with a sunburn and the fact it could rain - often on a hot humid day, it's sunny and then storm clouds form later on.
I think flame can definitely be improved because it is so dry, might change it to sweat - but I think something hot is good - maybe steam?