06-19-2024, 02:15 PM
It’s a very irritating poem.
This is an anti-war/anti-draft protest piece? It brings the idea of Dr Jekyl/Mr. Hyde/the werewolf into the Vietnam war. Good men did evil things and were dislocated from big spinning clockwork. The green and red, I assume, were the landing lights on an airstrip?
None of that makes it a good or bad poem. Just picking another fight.
This is an anti-war/anti-draft protest piece? It brings the idea of Dr Jekyl/Mr. Hyde/the werewolf into the Vietnam war. Good men did evil things and were dislocated from big spinning clockwork. The green and red, I assume, were the landing lights on an airstrip?
None of that makes it a good or bad poem. Just picking another fight.
A yak is normal.

