2024 NaPM 30 April

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Hiz Story

So tigers never really smoked?

                                            not even once upon a time?

I hear your coughs about a hoax
but tigers clearly used to smoke.

I've often heard them hack and choke
                                                                                     yet roar toward a finish line
                                                                                                                       like tigers who had never smoked,

not even once upon a time.

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Wow that was a really cool poem.  I think the abstract is appealing and it bodies, like when you start talking about how they "yet roar toward a finish line."  And I like how you answered your own question "not even once upon a time."

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