lyrics subforum

[Tiger the Lion]

“I removed some of the repetition”

Then you removed the chorus. You have provided a live chicken without a heart or bones.

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Busker,

Yes, a “lyric” is just a poem with stage directions. Also, a squid is just a dog that lives in the ocean plus some other stuff that doesn’t matter. Just like lyrics are “poems with stage direction according to crow,” “guns are just tools,” and “a cowboy without a horse is just a hat without a head.”

I have no idea why you think a sung poem with stage directions is just a poem, just like I have no idea why you think that’s what I’m saying.

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If you give a shit about what I think, ask me. Don’t say, “based on what you’re saying, you’re stupid.” Fuck right on off.

Crow, a reminder that you are the OP of this thread and posted it as a "Poetry Discussion." You began with "I’m posting this with the encouragement of the moderators of this forum." A reminder that we are not in "The Sewer." Telling a Mod (or any member for that matter) to fuck off is contrary to the rules of the Discussion forum, and frankly, not the best strategy for a discourse that you initiated. Do better. 
Mod.