Smells Like Teen Spirit
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And cutting out all the vocal repetition, it reads way better reformatted and makes more sense.  I would say these are the lyrics to the song even though I only wrote the chorus once, all the rest is flair (part of the music itself)



Load up on guns, bring your friends
It's fun to lose and to pretend
She's over bored and self-assured
Oh, no, I know a dirty word

Hello, hello, hello, how low?

I'm worse at what I do best
And for this gift I feel blessed
Our little group it's always been
And always will until the end

Hello, hello, hello, how low?

And I forget, just why I taste
Oh yeah, I guess it makes me smile
I found it hard, it's hard to find
Oh well, whatever, never mind

Hello, hello, hello, how low?

With the lights out, it's less dangerous
Here we are now, entertain us
I feel stupid, and contagious
Here we are now, entertain us
A mulatto, an albino
A mosquito, my libido


A denial, a denial

This is one of my favorite sublime songs 'were only gon a die from our own arrogance


Repeat 5 x
Early man walked away as modern man took control
Their minds weren't all the same, to conquer was their goal
So he built his great empire and he slaughtered his own kind
He died a confused man, killed himself with his own mind

Only 1x at the end
Were only gonna die from our own arrogance
That's why we might as well take our time


The chorus bridge verse nonsense doesn't even apply to pop music, sure there is a formula you could follow. But pop can't always be predicted.  There is a lot of garbage that follows the 'rules' that will never be popular.  

To start off a crit of lyrics by saying 'these aren't lyrics' only indicates your own inability to hear the music
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Messages In This Thread
Smells Like Teen Spirit - by crow - 06-10-2024, 03:08 PM
RE: Smells Like Teen Spirit - by busker - 06-10-2024, 03:40 PM
RE: Smells Like Teen Spirit - by CRNDLSM - 06-10-2024, 08:36 PM
RE: Smells Like Teen Spirit - by rowens - 06-10-2024, 11:21 PM



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