06-07-2024, 02:05 PM
Thanks for reading this one Miley and Bryn - I agree 'with your love' is the weakest part, it only serves to set up that it is involving a relationship, it doesn't add anything beyond that.
I've tried coming up with something better, but everything I've thought of so far is pretty clunky - I don't want to forget about this before I fix it, though, because it is one that could easily be improved if I think about it.
I've tried coming up with something better, but everything I've thought of so far is pretty clunky - I don't want to forget about this before I fix it, though, because it is one that could easily be improved if I think about it.