Departures

[Wjames]

Today
    my skin
    accepts 
    the pollen
      alone amongst
       smells of returning
         home  stickily humid
         spunk of grass  Made me chuckle, and it works in the image and with pollen.           
         greedy and green and damp and furled I love furled.
         everything
     I've been given This is a clear statement in images - there are so many beautiful things, but all there is in the moment is the bad. At least that's how I read it, with pollen implying some allergy.

 On the other side
of the planet
those frail leaf-lace things Works well with the spunk above.
everything This 'everything' is a bit awkward reading in this stanza to me, but I see it plays with the previous. I think it might be better if you cut 'things' above, and make 'everything', 'everythings'.
    I've given you
the transformed browns and violets
so out of place I think you could make this line better. i.e 'colouring the grey' but something better than that.
in airport terminals
with ceilings like palaces
somehow emptier I don't know if you need somehow.
than sky

Hey Miley, just my thoughts after a few reads. I liked it alot.