Into the Wilderness

[Pjames]

Interesting comments, Knot. I have just come here from a forum that seems to be dissolving, and no one had any suggestions like that. To implement your ideas, I would have to make the poem more wordy and more explanatory which, over on the other forum, they didn't care for. I wanted the poem to come across like an unsympathetic judgement by God.

However, having spent so much time analyzing it, I am going to try to implement all of your suggestions in a new version. Who knows, the new version may be a vast improvement. I definitely appreciate your attention and suggestions.

I am almost 74, and one of the things I learned in my life was to be concise, but concision isn't always best.

Thanks again!