Being Nemesis 2 (edit)

[dukealien]

Being Nemesis 2 (FPV)


Death-eyed I fly
unseen not because
they never look up...
no, I’m just not there.

My point of presence strikes
destroying huddled tons
of tanks and foxholes full
of cringing crying
smoking men

with tap of screen
touch of joystick
my homegrown terror-wraith
savors and executes
justice on invaders.

All from hidden safety...

relatively speaking.
I fear only other
patriotic fire-weavers
hunting me
for native justice mirror-spawns
avengers.

original version;

Death-eyed I fly
unseen not because
they never look up...
no, I’m just not there.

My point of presence strikes
destroying huddled tons
of tanks and foxholes full
of cringing crying
smoking men

with tap of screen
touch of joystick
my home-grown terror-wraith
savors and executes
justice on invaders.

All from hidden safety...

relatively speaking.
I fear only other
patriotic drone-controllers
hunting me
for native justice mirror-spawns
avengers.

FPV = First Person View.  Trying again...