Being Nemesis (old thread)
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Thanks to both critics!  Frankly, an idea came with the title and when I returned later to write the poem it just got lost.  I don't want to repeat "Eye of Ajax," but  have to agree a similar format (or lack thereof) will be a better fit.  What's worth saving?  Not the knights.  Terrorized tankers (ambiguous, so I used the more Russian "tankist"), and the guy with the death-eye.  Except the other side can buy drones, too.  "I'll be back," as that other Nemesis said...
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Being Nemesis (old thread) - by dukealien - 03-29-2024, 04:37 AM
RE: Being Nemesis - by TranquillityBase - 03-29-2024, 09:15 PM
RE: Being Nemesis - by TranquillityBase - 03-30-2024, 06:49 AM
RE: Being Nemesis - by Knot - 03-29-2024, 09:53 PM
RE: Being Nemesis - by dukealien - 03-30-2024, 06:48 AM
RE: Being Nemesis - by dukealien - 03-31-2024, 05:50 AM



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