03-25-2024, 04:30 PM
Thanks Knot, and thanks again Tranquil.
I made an edit, added some things, addressed most of your thoughts - I think it is much better now, not sure if I want to tinker with it anymore or not. Maybe I should add one conversation bit before the last stanza?
I made an edit, added some things, addressed most of your thoughts - I think it is much better now, not sure if I want to tinker with it anymore or not. Maybe I should add one conversation bit before the last stanza?