03-20-2024, 02:17 AM
(03-20-2024, 01:19 AM)Michaelpoet Wrote: I like your ability to allow us to see through the eyes of the character.This is insufficient critique for this forum. Please read forum guidelines before posting as each forum has different rules. If you are new to critique, we have advice posts that you can read pinned to the top of the critique forums. You may add to or edit your critique if you wish. In the future, insufficient critique will be deleted and will not count toward your posting goals. If you have questions or would like advice or help On giving critique, you are always welcome to pm a mod for guidance. Thank you for your contributions thus far.
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