02-25-2024, 05:48 AM
edit2;
I wear the darkly shaded eyes of age:
a newly sagging epicanthic fold–
so few fast-burning decades since my birth–
surprised me. Shall I yield to weary rage
embittered at this mark of growing old
or welcome rest’s approach a shadow’s-worth?
No, not ganging-up at all... opportunity to quadrangulate! Thanks again to all critics.
Tried, but can't give up the rage - perhaps as modified noun rather than naked verb?
I wear the darkly shaded eyes of age:
a newly sagging epicanthic fold–
so few fast-burning decades since my birth–
surprised me. Shall I yield to weary rage
embittered at this mark of growing old
or welcome rest’s approach a shadow’s-worth?
No, not ganging-up at all... opportunity to quadrangulate! Thanks again to all critics.
Tried, but can't give up the rage - perhaps as modified noun rather than naked verb?
Non-practicing atheist