A New Wrinkle (edit4)

[Tiger the Lion]

Really enjoyed this. Just wanted to jump in and confirm that "rage against" is a hurdle for me too. Only slightly less than "take up arms against" might distract. Luckily, "rage" is not irreplaceable. Lots of potential tweaks. I won't make a specific suggestion, but can think of a few that might work well.

Edit: the title is wonderful. both literal and metaphorical. the deconstruction of a common phrase