January Oracle (edit)

January Oracle (edit)

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02-17-2024, 11:22 PM

I was wondering where the original poem went

The rewritten one is a completely different poem, and not knowing much about the I Ching I don’t get it

I interpreted the original as the specialist giving a prognosis. Merciless eyes fit well.
The I Ching was just to while away the time while waiting, a distraction
The dragons fighting - all the other details being distractions. Or a memory of some Cretaceous valley.

I don’t know what to make of the new one

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January Oracle (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 01-14-2024, 03:31 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-25-2024, 01:03 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by brynmawr1 - 01-25-2024, 06:29 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-26-2024, 09:07 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by CRNDLSM - 01-25-2024, 11:00 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by Knot - 01-26-2024, 03:09 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by brynmawr1 - 01-26-2024, 10:03 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-26-2024, 10:38 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 01-27-2024, 12:48 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by Knot - 01-27-2024, 03:56 AM