01-10-2024, 06:25 AM
(01-10-2024, 12:43 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: So I am alone as alwaysMakes me feel like I've been there.
born again and again cross the wounded galaxies.
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Besides those first two lines, I especially liked:
"So we leave the bloody apes behind
(old mind tapes can be wiped clean)"
"like the cylinder gimmick in the adding machine
that magnetizes rage patterns."
I'm still working on mine, but it looks like I'm going to have to step up my game.

Tranquility Base noted my example of segments was a bit confusing
so I updated it. I copied the update in the p.s. below so you won't
have to go back and read through the rest of it:
And just a reminder: Questions, comments, discussion should be put right here in this thread
along with our answers to the challenge. I am hoping the challenge threads will be an interesting
mishmash, not just answers to the challenges.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

