10-29-2023, 03:04 PM
Thanks for your feedback 
I’ve been giving myself a little bit of a pass on repeating words here since it’s dialogue, but I think I need to work in some alternates. And it’s clear that the X’s and O’s line is just a mess
Thanks for you help!

I’ve been giving myself a little bit of a pass on repeating words here since it’s dialogue, but I think I need to work in some alternates. And it’s clear that the X’s and O’s line is just a mess

Thanks for you help!

