The Musician
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Thanks for your feedback  Smile

I’ve been giving myself a little bit of a pass on repeating words here since it’s dialogue, but I think I need to work in some alternates. And it’s clear that the X’s and O’s line is just a mess  Hysterical

Thanks for you help!
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The Musician - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-28-2023, 12:37 PM
RE: The Musician - by Knot - 10-28-2023, 10:34 PM
RE: The Musician - by TranquillityBase - 10-28-2023, 11:07 PM
RE: The Musician - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-29-2023, 12:25 AM
RE: The Musician - by Knot - 10-29-2023, 01:44 AM
RE: The Musician - by TranquillityBase - 10-29-2023, 06:11 AM
RE: The Musician - by CRNDLSM - 10-29-2023, 08:16 AM
RE: The Musician - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-29-2023, 03:04 PM
RE: The Musician - by Knot - 10-29-2023, 11:33 PM
RE: The Musician - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-30-2023, 12:21 AM



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