The Musician

[TranquillityBase]

Knot and Tranquility, thank you both very much for your critique and your suggestions, I greatly appreciate you both 

You’ve both pointed out some of the same rough spots, which gives me an excellent road map. 

Not that this excuses any of the rough patches, but for the sake of clarity this is a double abecedarian. I went back and forth on including that in the title (Double Abecedarian: The Musician) but decided against it. I’m still a little on the fence about it. Thoughts/opinions?

OK, did't see that coming.  I think that's a very cool experiment.  I think adding it to the title would give the reader like me the pleasure of appreciating it.