The Musician

[Knot]

Hi FS.

Firstly kudos on the form (not that I noticed. D'oh!) but apart from the utility of the exercise itself, what is it adding to the content? For me, not much - though it does explain that baffling X and O line. Doesn't justify it mind, but does explain it.

I'd just observe that simply because you started with that form doesn't mean you have to end with it. What works best for the poem?

Best, Knot

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