10-14-2023, 09:10 PM
(10-11-2023, 02:16 AM)Lizzie Wrote: how to win a cupid awardI love the clarity and conciseness. The engaging title and the first stanza are a perfect pair, and I'm enjoying what I feel is the wry tone of acknowledging past (and possibly ongoing) errors of judgement in the relationship stakes.
run breakneck
and unaware
into the glass
you'll shatter
into a thousand
lies
The observation in the poem is I'm sure relatable for most people.
Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.