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Hi Bob,

Your question’s not daft  Smile

I’m sure that your friend means well, but I’d suggest shrugging off their critique at this point. Go ahead and write. Then, if you can honestly say that you’ve done all you can to select and arrange the right words, I promise that what you’ve written is poetry.
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every line - by bob@mancity.net - 10-12-2023, 10:55 PM
RE: every line - by CRNDLSM - 10-12-2023, 11:20 PM
RE: every line - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-13-2023, 02:23 AM
RE: every line - by rayheinrich - 10-13-2023, 03:30 PM
RE: every line - by bob@mancity.net - 10-13-2023, 03:39 PM



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