every line
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could i ask probably a daft question

Does every line need to be poetic ?

I’ve had feedback from a friend 

“that is not poetry, it’s prose”
Also that line is not good enough even though i have 
rhymed it well 

I get both ?

Just interested if lines can just lead to a good one 
coming next or 
if each line needs to be a good one ?

thank you 
Bob
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Messages In This Thread
every line - by bob@mancity.net - 10-12-2023, 10:55 PM
RE: every line - by CRNDLSM - 10-12-2023, 11:20 PM
RE: every line - by Fearful Symmetry - 10-13-2023, 02:23 AM
RE: every line - by rayheinrich - 10-13-2023, 03:30 PM
RE: every line - by bob@mancity.net - 10-13-2023, 03:39 PM



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