how to win a cupid award
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This piece was part of a thread, written to a prompt.

Sometimes it's difficult for me to see a piece objectively when it's surrounded by the context of a prompt and the other pieces in a thread, and I think that happened here to some degree. I'm guessing that the cliche of "a million little pieces" wasn't fully or properly subverted and just read as a straightforward cliche. Perhaps the hyperbole of 'thousand' isn't helping.  

As far as pop culture references, I try not to use them much because shows and artists get cancelled or fall out of fashion and then your work drags along behind. The rest of the time I just do what I want. Hysterical But, here, I wasn't trying to reference any particular artist or show. 

I think it's so interesting how some people read this as being very teenager and others are like, wow, you're so old. Hysterical It's always curious how interpretations differ; I am eternally intrigued by the human mind. 

I appreciate all sincerely-offered thoughts and responses, even if unflattering.  >Big Grin
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how to win a cupid award - by Lizzie - 10-11-2023, 02:16 AM
RE: how to win a cupid award - by CRNDLSM - 10-11-2023, 04:00 AM
RE: how to win a cupid award - by rayheinrich - 10-11-2023, 06:42 AM
RE: how to win a cupid award - by rowens - 10-11-2023, 07:35 AM
RE: how to win a cupid award - by Lizzie - 10-12-2023, 05:41 AM
RE: how to win a cupid award - by DonMar - 10-14-2023, 09:10 PM



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