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Oreo (haiku)

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09-29-2023, 09:44 PM

(09-29-2023, 01:22 PM)Lizzie Wrote: fields asleep below
voluminous cumulus---
moonlit Oreo

The second line all by itself is worth the price of admission Thumbsup

Took a moment to find the top layer (the chocolate cookie above the cloud filling)... it's the night sky, amiright?

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Oreo (haiku) - by Lizzie - 09-29-2023, 01:22 PM

RE: Oreo (haiku) - by dukealien - 09-29-2023, 09:44 PM

RE: Oreo (haiku) - by Lizzie - 09-30-2023, 04:09 AM

RE: Oreo (haiku) - by rayheinrich - 09-30-2023, 06:15 PM

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