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Amazonian Delivery - Edit
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09-17-2023, 04:03 AM
(09-16-2023, 12:10 PM)Lizzie Wrote: Hi, Duke. Can I ask what meter were you going for here? It appears to be a little bit hodgepodge. But, I can help if I know what you're aiming for.You can and may. I was going for galumphing, rollicking, with a dash of larruping - fairly consistent within each stanza but varying as if a storyteller were changing stance, expression, or tone with each.  Non-practicing atheist
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Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by dukealien - 09-12-2023, 11:14 PM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - by Wjames - 09-14-2023, 08:41 AM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - by Knot - 09-14-2023, 11:23 PM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by dukealien - 09-15-2023, 09:48 AM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by Knot - 09-15-2023, 08:38 PM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by Lizzie - 09-16-2023, 12:10 PM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by dukealien - 09-17-2023, 04:03 AM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by Lizzie - 09-17-2023, 11:42 AM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by bob@mancity.net - 10-11-2023, 10:53 PM
RE: Amazonian Delivery - Edit - by DonMar - 10-12-2023, 11:57 AM
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