Amazonian Delivery - Edit

[Knot]

Hi duke,

polishing up nicely. Like the new ending, but though? Not sure about that.

Still not convinced by 'delivered/savored' (but 'prime piranhas' is a nice touch.)

It probably isn't factually accurate (I imagine the fish are too small) but

prime piranhas' liver savored

might rescue the line? Also, should it be 'and next years' ... ?)

Doesn't 'dine well' render gustatorial irrelevant?

Just a thought

Tribes from times primordial

do, in jungles equatorial,

practice fine arts piscatorial,

for reasons gustatorial.

Maybe 'westerns' for 'moderns' (just for the alliteration)?

Best, Knot

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