08-24-2023, 06:48 AM
(08-24-2023, 06:38 AM)Lizzie Wrote:I liked it. Thread is for exercise after all. More a yoga class than a photo shoot.(08-24-2023, 06:29 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:There's more circles/cycles, although some of it's a little tortured (like the water cycle).(08-23-2023, 01:17 AM)Lizzie Wrote: CircleYou actually did include all of the numbers 0-9. Clever girl.
you'd been gone for five years.
by three vines of English ivy.
Her stone says 1 8 7 6-1 9 0 5,
and leave the two behind;
It played four times that night
as we came full (circle) love how this line ties back to the title
There's more to this piece every time I read it.
-Mark
I can't decide if I like this piece. It's too up its own ass trying to be clever -- a bit cloying.
Thanks for the reads, all the same.
