08-21-2023, 05:31 PM
(08-21-2023, 05:41 AM)rowens Wrote: CandorI very much enjoyed this one, though it contains many mysteries. I am drawn to it, like the fly.
The Earth works, don't think you need that final comma
though the Moon's a calendar
ever changing
the day's same round.
Hints of codes oblige
the armory,
and beasts in white lab coats
entwine their machinations.
Who can blame Angels,
being purely what they are,
or Fay, or even not sure how you are using "Fay" here; "the Fay" as in the fairies?
the square, blustering
Demons their fair trial
of a deal, living what's the deal?
as we must, then
returning to the ground.
"No," said the little fly
no one listened to
without
annoyance,
"I don't just live a day,
despite what you
think. And unlike you,
I don't understand the moon."
TqB

