08-13-2023, 06:17 AM
(08-13-2023, 03:55 AM)O. M. Geezersnaps Wrote: There's a multitude of tangential meanings for one to entertain, some more justified than others. That's what makes this piece great: we're not struggling to find meaning, just sifting through tantalizing possibilities.Thanks for that OMG. If "old" is implied, you're right, I may be able to slip in a more textured modifier. The thing about those old lawnmowers is they worked forever. The new ones are like kitchen appliances and only last a few years. So the lawnmower is as much a perennial miracle as spring itself.
One opportunity that I did see: I think that "old" is implied because it's the father's lawnmower. You could put that syllable to other use, if you wanted.
Really well done.
