6-9-23
#3
There's a multitude of tangential meanings for one to entertain, some more justified than others. That's what makes this piece great: we're not struggling to find meaning, just sifting through tantalizing possibilities. 

One opportunity that I did see: I think that "old" is implied because it's the father's lawnmower. You could put that syllable to other use, if you wanted. 

Really well done.

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6-9-23 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-10-2023, 04:26 AM
RE: 6-9-23 - by brynmawr1 - 06-10-2023, 05:46 AM
RE: 6-9-23 - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 03:55 AM
RE: 6-9-23 - by Tiger the Lion - 08-13-2023, 06:17 AM
RE: 6-9-23 - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 06:52 AM



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