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08-12-2023, 12:41 AM
(08-11-2023, 09:29 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: This one is for those of us who stand proudly together, in aging naked bodies, fling open the windows, and howl at the moon.This is a nice line. Would make a good conclusion or opening. Gives you a vivid core image and cogent central theme. I would like to read this poem. |
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(hidden message) - by Mark A Becker - 08-09-2023, 09:12 PM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Lizzie - 08-10-2023, 01:07 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Mark A Becker - 08-10-2023, 01:18 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by rowens - 08-10-2023, 08:47 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Mark A Becker - 08-10-2023, 09:05 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Lizzie - 08-11-2023, 06:41 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Mark A Becker - 08-11-2023, 09:29 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Lizzie - 08-12-2023, 12:41 AM
RE: (message in a bottle) - by Quixilated - 08-11-2023, 12:32 PM
RE: (hidden message) - by Mark A Becker - 08-11-2023, 11:23 PM
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