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[brynmawr1]

Well Steve - reads like a fairly accurate description of cats. 

My only suggestion is to try to embellish some of the lines so it doesn't read so list-like, unless you intended for it to be a list poem.

- Mark

Hi Mark,
Thanks for reading and commenting.  Not meant to be a list poem per se.  I was experimenting with the line breaks and wanted to see what others thought of it.  Looking back again I see that there are some that don't really add anything.
Take care,
steve