Mesopredator

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Mark A Becker Offline

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08-11-2023, 12:38 AM

Well Steve - reads like a fairly accurate description of cats.

My only suggestion is to try to embellish some of the lines so it doesn't read so list-like, unless you intended for it to be a list poem.

- Mark

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Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-08-2023, 05:41 AM

RE: Mesopredator - by dukealien - 08-08-2023, 09:25 AM

RE: Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-10-2023, 12:43 PM

RE: Mesopredator - by TranquillityBase - 08-10-2023, 07:16 PM

RE: Mesopredator - by TranquillityBase - 08-08-2023, 10:08 AM

RE: Mesopredator - by Mark A Becker - 08-11-2023, 12:38 AM

RE: Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-11-2023, 05:09 AM

RE: Mesopredator - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 06:10 AM

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