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Mesopredator
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08-10-2023, 07:16 PM
(08-10-2023, 12:43 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Betraying is harder. I asked a lot of that the way it is written. Going to get explain-mostly meant to be a betrayal of the biting as predator and turn a bit to prey and it worked for me sonically. Maybe move 'betraying' to previous stanza?What about another stanza before the last: betraying each other we play predator feeling like prey Just another 2 cents, TqB |
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Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-08-2023, 05:41 AM
RE: Mesopredator - by dukealien - 08-08-2023, 09:25 AM
RE: Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-10-2023, 12:43 PM
RE: Mesopredator - by TranquillityBase - 08-10-2023, 07:16 PM
RE: Mesopredator - by TranquillityBase - 08-08-2023, 10:08 AM
RE: Mesopredator - by Mark A Becker - 08-11-2023, 12:38 AM
RE: Mesopredator - by brynmawr1 - 08-11-2023, 05:09 AM
RE: Mesopredator - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 06:10 AM
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