07-04-2023, 01:33 PM
Thanks, TqB, Kynaston
TqB - there is probably one less line. Will give it some thought
Kynaston- good point about the ‘purveyor’. The original line had purloiner / purveyor as in the edit, have restored it otherwise yeah, it doesn’t make sense
‘Pages are shaken’ is grammatically fine. But it’s better to pair it with ‘those who write’ - have done that
Regarding Wikipedia articles, that depends on how much the reader knows. These are fairly standard cultural references that people should be aware of - certainly more so than of American popular music as an example. The footnotes are to help those who mightn’t be aware.
TqB - there is probably one less line. Will give it some thought
Kynaston- good point about the ‘purveyor’. The original line had purloiner / purveyor as in the edit, have restored it otherwise yeah, it doesn’t make sense
‘Pages are shaken’ is grammatically fine. But it’s better to pair it with ‘those who write’ - have done that
Regarding Wikipedia articles, that depends on how much the reader knows. These are fairly standard cultural references that people should be aware of - certainly more so than of American popular music as an example. The footnotes are to help those who mightn’t be aware.