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Hungry Ghost
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06-28-2023, 10:09 AM
(06-28-2023, 03:56 AM)dukealien Wrote: Hungry GhostHi Duke, Enjoyed this one, as usual. Given the form it would be difficult to translate the second line into images. Though I do like the thought of little raccoon paws working the shore. I also like how you used the iconic image of an iceberg to relate back to this current tragedy as both resulted from the themes of you short poem. well done. bryn |
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Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 03:56 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by rowens - 06-28-2023, 04:17 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 04:33 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by busker - 06-28-2023, 08:01 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 09:55 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by brynmawr1 - 06-28-2023, 10:09 AM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by dukealien - 06-28-2023, 09:40 PM
RE: Hungry Ghost - by Kynaston Levitt - 06-29-2023, 06:51 AM
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